I would have like to have seen you use a tripod, some of the video shots are bit jarring and jagged. At the 5 sec mark I would have used a cleaner shot which I'm sure you had, it just looks like you zoomed and lost your balance. Also at the 23 sec mark you have two layers running at the same time and in the corners your previous shot is visible. All and all its a good attempt. Always look for visual variety even in video shots and there's a lot you could have done with it. Just thought I would give my suggestions since you asked for comments!
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